Thursday, December 26, 2013
Still Waiting (Somewhat Patiently).. Still Writing (Though Never Enough)
In the meantime, I've been a bit lazy in the writing department, still have not returned to The Deathcheater's Diary, but I did start another short story. I've been circling a Big Idea for a series for years now, a story I've been dying to tell but just haven't felt ready. It's a little intimidating because it will be a full-length novel with a few characters I want to use in prequels and sequels.
Short stories are easier to manage and are also a wonderful way to hone one's writing skills. They can also be a way to dip a toe into a fictional world, start fleshing out some background, perhaps even get to know the characters and find new ones. My first dalliance into this world I wish to build is called Ashe. It is set in 1881, right here in Michigan. Sort of.
I anticipate getting the story done in January. Other ideas are falling in line behind it, and I daresay it won't belong before I start work on the main act, for which I have two ideas for a title, but I'm going to withhold those for awhile.
Tuesday, November 26, 2013
No NaNoWriMo
As far as my back out of NaNoWriMo, I have a 'been there, done that feeling' after completing the challenge with Noah's Custodian. The issue I have with NaNoWriMo is that it is so dead focused on a number, not really the art or love of novel writing. I get it- I understand what they are about- erasing the excuses and writing, come hell or high water, quality and substance be damned (but if you can do that too, more power to you). The breakneck pace did have the effect- for me- of writing a real page turner- the story literally sprinted along. But it took a year of polishing to get it to where I was comfortable trying to sell it.
I still await word on Analog's acceptance or rejection of the novel, but that's just fine. I've scribbled the beginnings of a couple of other novels, and I continue to plug away at Death Cheater's Diary, though now as a short story.
Just have to keep putting words on the screen.
Sunday, October 27, 2013
Will Noah's Custodian Get Published?
It wound up at just over 54,000 words- 4,000 words longer than the first draft. Most works are supposed to get shorter after editing, but given that it was written in an extreme hurry, it needed more exposition and details. It is fairly different from the first iteration.
I want to thank my good friend Jeff Saladin for helping push me to make it better. His advice was invaluable and very insightful. And, of course, I must thank my family for putting up with me as I worked on it. My wife has fully supported me in my dream to be an author. She'd love me to be a best selling author and make lots of money at it so she can spend her time building a foundation, being home with the kids, and working on photography. I'm trying!
Analog magazine is one of the most prestigious Sci-Fi publications out there, and it accepts novel-length submissions of up to 80,000 words (they are serialized). I'm going to start there, and I believe I could then seek traditional or self-publication in book form some time after publication if they give me a chance. The downside is that I may not be able to see my work in print for a couple of years, but that's the biz. They pay upon acceptance so that would be nice. So, I have to format my manuscript for Analog and send it in, I'll do that this week.
If that doesn't fly, I may try querying a couple of agents and sending it to some publishers. The problem I'm likely to run into is that it is short for a novel- I read in many places that the big publishing houses want 70,000 words, minimum. So I'll look at some Indie publishers and see where that takes me.
If all else fails, I will self-publish on Amazon. So, it will get published, one way or another.
At any rate, we'll see where this takes me. More importantly, I'm excited to move on to something new. I have so many ideas for novels, and I want to write them all. There is only one way to do it.
Saturday, October 12, 2013
A New Challenge
Even as I aim to finish prepping Noah's Custodian for publication (formally if accepted, by myself if no taker is found), my thoughts have turned to the next NaNoWriMo beginning November 1st.
My musings have lead me to another story that already has a title. My next novel will be named The Death Cheater's Diary. Once again, I'll shoot to write 50,000 words in 30 days.
While the central premise has a sci-fi twist, I expect this to be a human condition story, as many sci-fi stories are.
Friday, August 9, 2013
Billy Boyle
I recently read "Billy Boyle: A World War II Mystery" by James R. Benn. I've never been a murder mystery kind of guy, but this one caught my eye since it was briefly offered as a free Kindle book and it was set during WWII. I loved the book- I enjoy fiction intertwined with real history and I'm fascinated by WWII. Billy Boyle's investigations continue in a series of sequels. I'm looking forward to reading them all. Benn's prose and dialog are wonderful. The first book is in first-person- normally not my favorite- but Benn's style is enjoyable and fresh. Always a treat to discover a new author.
Saturday, July 27, 2013
Facing Rejection
Other avenues include traditional publishing, but that remains a tough nut to crack for a first-time novelist. A good story should speak for itself, but you still have to cross all the T's and dot all the I's and get the right eyes on it. Plus- my book is barely considered a novel in terms of length. It may grow a bit more, depending on feedback, but I can't see it getting past 60,000 words; most publishers of traditional novels want 70,000+ minimum.
As mentioned previously, many publishers now offer digital-only imprints, and my novel is well-suited for that, but there are challenges with many of these new imprints.
At any rate, a first time novelist is likely to be rejected many times. Even JK Rowling still gets rejected, albeit writing under a pen name. Still, it pays to be persistent, if you know you have a good story, as evidenced by Irish novelist Donal Ryan's 47 rejections prior to finding a publisher.
As for my efforts of late, considering which project to work on, all have been started to various degrees: an unconventional fantasy novel (good start on this), a contemporary science-fiction series aimed at tweens and young teens (decent start), or my long gestating Christmas short-story (research, some sketchy plot ideas written out). I'm also kicking around an idea for a new series of sci-fi short stories with recurring characters. We'll see!
Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Getting Published After 40
Sunday, July 21, 2013
Clive Cussler
Prior to that, I mostly read fantasy tales and some science fiction. That book opened up the realm of the historical techno thriller, leading me not only to the rest of Cussler's work, but to Tom Clancy and Michael Crichton as well. In more recent years, I've read James Rollins (Map of Bones hooked me while on a camping trip), Doug Preston and Lee Child, Steve Berry, Jack Du Brul, and Dan Brown.
USA Today interviewed Cussler recently. I love the old vintage Cussler books, but have been less enamored with his new direction of only co-authoring with 4 to 5 other authors. Cussler has become a brand, and while I've enjoyed many of the collaborations (especially the ones with Paul Kemprecos and Du Brul), they're not the same as the solo Cussler works of yesteryear.
I'm glad others have picked up the mantle, especially Rollins, who'd I consider Cussler's heir apparent.
Sunday, July 14, 2013
Noah's Custodian is Out to My Critical Readers
If all else fails, I will publish it myself, for better or worse. No reason not to. More importantly, its time to start moving away from that novel for good and begin work on the next one!
Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Digital Imprints
My book, Noah's Custodian, may be a nice fit for them. I am considering self-publishing it in ebook format, and had thought in the 1 in a million chance that someone want to publish it, then it could get a print edition that way. However, I'm intrigued by Random House's overture and will give that a go!
Which means.. I need to finishing editing the darn thing and submit it!
Thursday, June 13, 2013
Speaking of Michael Chrichton...
The US Supreme Court ruled today that human genes cannot be patented. While it seems like an obvious outcome- discovery is not invention- big business would love a monopoly any way it can get it.
Michael Crichton wrote a book about this very issue: Next. I'm sure he would have applauded today's outcome.
Wednesday, June 12, 2013
Dan's Inferno
Dan Brown's writing has never impressed me- I think it is adequate at best. However, he has a true knack for crafting thrillers steeped in history, symbols and trivia. Inferno is worlds better than his last effort, The Lost Symbol, especially in the prose department. Its Big Idea is controversial and blessedly nonreligious this time around.
Robert Langdon is not his usual self in this one, and the history seems a bit forced from time to time. The antagonist's plot is elaborate and it seems a bit forced, too, as it ties to Dante's masterpiece as literally as it can. However, as an escapist summer read, and as the basis of an inevitable movie, it does just fine. Not as explosive as the Code, but Brown will never match that height again, no author could. You only get to catch lightning in the bottle once.
If you liked his other Langdon books, you'll enjoy this one for what it is- a breeze of a read, soon forgotten but a worthwhile pastime.
Monday, June 10, 2013
Interesting Parallel
Stephen Hawking recently reversed himself (or publicly revealed what he privately held all along) that God wasn't necessary in the creation of the universe. Fine as a theory, perhaps, but our knowledge of the Natural Law is still so nascent it is arrogant to presume we have enough information to declare anything with certainty.
Physicists are busily working on theories and proofs that may show that everything could have sprung from nothing, no divine intervention required. I, for one, believe this is irrelevant to our faith. Both can exist- there is no need for one to cancel or disprove the other. There is plenty of room for both.
http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2013/jun/07/god-in-science-fiction
Wednesday, June 5, 2013
Band of Brothers
I'm admittedly late to the Stephen E. Ambrose party in that I've only read two of his books. I read Undaunted Courage, which is an acclaimed description of Lewis & Clark's legendary trip to explore the West and find a path to the Pacific. I recently completed Band of Brothers. While I've seen the HBO series several times, I just got around to reading the book.
While the series is wonderful, Ambrose relies on first person accounts- often using the veterans' own words to describe what the soldiers saw, felt and thought. You do get bits and pieces of that in the show, but it is especially moving to read their accounts. It is an incredible book for that reason. Granted, Easy Company was an extraordinary group, but its veterans' descriptions of war and comradarie are staggering in their power and honesty.
I heartily recommend the book (truly a short, approachable read) and the series!
Tuesday, June 4, 2013
Back to Work
That said, my career- love it as I do- is my second choice. My first choice would be to be a writer, though to look at how I spend my leisure time you wouldn't think it.
I harp on my children on how you have to work at something to achieve your goal. I'm a hypocrit in that regard- I believe I have the talent to be a published author. Don't know if I can make a living at it, and that's not really the point. But it is a dream of mine, within my power to achieve, if I just put in the work. So, immediately upon posting this, I'm getting back to editing Noah's Custodian. My self-imposed deadline is rushing toward me.
The take-away: do something every day that gets you closer to your goal, no matter how trivial it may seem. In my case, even if I sit down to edit a paragraph or write 100 new words, it's progress. Not ideal.. but progress none-the-less. If I wrote just 100 words a day, that would be 36,500 by the end of the year- about half way through a 300 page novel. I know I can do better than that, but it illustrates the point.
Back to work!
Saturday, June 1, 2013
Michael Crichton
http://www.guardian.co.uk/
I admired Crichton's ability to write a plausible, interesting thriller around any subject he found interesting. You can tell that he wrote what he was interested in, researched it thoroughly, and usually could build a compelling, 'for the masses' story around a given concept, historical subject or technology. Too bad we lost him at such a young age.
He is the author I'd like most to emulate- I wouldn't want to be stuck in one genre. Starting out, it may be smart to use pen names as brands within particular genres, giving one the ability to 'break' into various genres while satisfying the market's need to pigeonhole. It is a rare popular author that can avoid that fate and cross genres with equal success.
Thursday, February 14, 2013
Another Sneak Peek: Chapter I
Without further ado:
Saturday, February 2, 2013
Sneak Peek: Prologue to Noah's Custodian

If you notice, this post is e-prime.. until just then.. oops! Tougher than you think!
So, without further ado:
Monday, January 28, 2013
Footnote 3: Language
For example, I recently read a Popular Science article about how other cultures have words for emotions that do not have English equivalents. You lose the language, you lose words others have created to describe something we literally have no words for.
I wonder what Aramaic words cannot be translated to English directly.
Sunday, January 27, 2013
Chapter 4: A New Direction
I'm about ready to finally begin editing Noah's Custodian. I'm a little nervous that I'm going to read it and be disappointed. I know I'll always be my own worst critic. We'll see. I do have some ideas that I want to work in to embellish and round out the principal antagonist.
I'm now reading Robert Jordan & Brandon Sanderson's A Memory of Light, the concluding novel of the Wheel of Time series. I can hardly believe I've been reading this series since it began in 1990; it survived the death of it's progenitor, who seemed to be getting lost in a morass of prose and exposition in the later volumes. After his death, Sanderson picked up the reins for the final three volumes and what a breath of fresh air! I'd almost given up on the series- Sanderson made me very glad that I'd stuck with it. Apparently Jordan left the outline and various scenes- including the ending- for his successor to work with, and Sanderson has truly done wonders.
I just finished Charon's Claw.. the latest novel by R.A. Salvatore featuring his elven hero, Drizzt Do'Urden. Unfortunately, as has been the case for awhile now, it was another forgettable but passable entry. His fight scenes are as ornate and exciting as ever, but one wearies of the politics and plotting of uninteresting villains as well as Drizzt's constant introspection. It is partly the fault of the Dungeons & Dragons brain trust, who apparently are going to shake things up once again in the Realms and lay the ground work for the direction Mr. Salvatore can take.
Wednesday, January 23, 2013
Back to School
I'm trying out a course, taught by Eric S. Rabkin, entitled 'Fantasy and Science Fiction: The Human Mind. Our Modern World'. I've been out of college since spring of 2010, and while this is voluntary and ungraded, I hope to slowly build my literature background and experience.
It is hard to believe these courses are being made available- access to wonderful professors and peers in a way unimaginable even a decade ago, at virtually $0. While some may caution 'you get what you pay for', I believe in terms of education you can pay for it by simply putting the work in. You determine the worth of your education by your effort.
We'll see how it goes and I'll post occasional updates here.
Saturday, January 19, 2013
Book List 2: The Spy
Cussler has gone the way of Tom Clancy, becoming a brand-name as much as an author, with hit-or-miss results. He is collaborating with his son Dirk on the further adventures of Dirk Pitt, and ended his long relationship with Paul Kemprecos for the Kurt Austin series, Numa Files. I enjoyed those as well as his collaborations with Jack DuBrul in the Oregon series. I actually read DuBrul's novels prior to his teaming up with Cussler.
The Spy marked my first go-round with the Isaac Bell series, and it was.. mediocre. The tone and historical setting was interesting, the plot a bit convoluted and dull, the prose passable.
I give it a 2.5 out of 5.